Lonely [ inspirat dupa melodia Lonely - Mcfly ] one shot :X

Nature`s Mistake~*~

deci am scris o pov scurta inspirata din songu lonely :x sper ca va place :lol:

Lonely
Tom’s POV
Flashback:
“Ok Tom this is my cousin Rachel.”
“Nice to meet you Tom.”
“Nice to meet you to.”
End of flashback
God she looked so pretty that day. And she smelled so good. Like roses only better. I don’t have words to describe her. She’s perfect. And she was mine. But she isn’t anymore. Cause she left. And I know why. Because I’m a freackin jerk. That’s why. What I did has no excuse. But I didn’t mean it. I was stupid and drunk. I never would have done that. But it’s too late now. She’s never coming back and I can’t blame her. I’m such an ass. But without her I’m empty. I’m nothing without her. I can’t go on without her voice, her sent, her eyes, her skin, her face, her everything. She is everything for me. And I can’t believe I was such an ass and did what I did. I can still remember her face that night. Of curse I do. It happened 2 days ago.
Flashback:
“Tom? What the hell??? I can’t believe this! Why??
“ Rachel I’m so sorry! Please let me explain. It’s not like this. I swear I didn’t know what I was doing.”
“Oh you can keep your excuses to yourself. I don’t want to hear them. What you did has no excuse. I never want to see you again in my life.”
“But Rachel please hear me out. I swear that….”
But she was gone. She left. Shut the door real loud behind her. What in the hell did I just do? I went and slept with another girl. Why, Tom, why? You had the sublim girl. Why??
End of flashback
Now I’m here. Alone. In this house. Our house. How am I going to go on without her? She is everything to me. I tried calling her. She doesn’t want to talk to me. She acts like she doesn’t even know me. This is killing me. I’m never going to find someone like her.

the end :D
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You say "Foul, loathsome evil little cockroach" like it's a BAD thing
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And I don't even know what kind of things I said
My mouth kept moving and my mind went dead
So I'm picking up the pieces, now where to begin
The hardest part of ending is starting again

McFly-er17 · Trimis: 09/05/2009 21:02 Titlul subiectului:

nais

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The belief in a supernatural source of evil is not necessary. Men alone are quite capable of every wickedness!
-Joseph Conrad

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Nature`s Mistake~*~ · Trimis: 09/05/2009 21:05 Titlul subiectului:

thanks :d but tu cand mai scrii la pov ta?:D:D:D
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You say "Foul, loathsome evil little cockroach" like it's a BAD thing
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And I don't even know what kind of things I said
My mouth kept moving and my mind went dead
So I'm picking up the pieces, now where to begin
The hardest part of ending is starting again

McFly-er17 · Trimis: 09/05/2009 21:07 Titlul subiectului:

acuma termin pentru azi si postez :D
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The belief in a supernatural source of evil is not necessary. Men alone are quite capable of every wickedness!
-Joseph Conrad

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Nature`s Mistake~*~ · Trimis: 09/05/2009 21:08 Titlul subiectului:

iuhuuu :DD:D:DD
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You say "Foul, loathsome evil little cockroach" like it's a BAD thing
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And I don't even know what kind of things I said
My mouth kept moving and my mind went dead
So I'm picking up the pieces, now where to begin
The hardest part of ending is starting again

biili · New Member Data inscrierii: 09/Mai/2009 Mesaje: 1

nice

Wmt503 · Trimis: 10/05/2009 20:51 Titlul subiectului:

cool :D
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